How does this sound->my essay what do you think of it so far?

Well done! Just some grammar tips: Always write out numbers. For example, in the sentence, "The cause of these hurtful words comes from 2 sources", write 'two' instead. Also, depending on your teacher, (Some prefer different styles of writing), a comma doesn't always come before the word "and". Again, it depends upon your teacher's preferences. Finally, in the first line of your second paragraph, you have the word "can" in all caps. This isn't necessary. Maybe because Y!Answers doesn't give the option of italicizing, I don't know, but, in your final draft, it's better to italicize the word. Caps should only be used when being used as an interjection or Acronym. I know, I sound like a teacher...anyway, the paper itself is great! You definitely deserve an A!