Does my story sound good so far? Please answer, I really need opinions!?

To start off, the first chapter seems really good, but I think you're rushing it and not giving enough details. What is she actually doing in the beginning? What is she trying to learn? I didn't quite understand that part, I think you need to explain it better. Another this is, you're rushing it. One minute she's concentrating on trying to learn something, and then it's 20 minutes later. You need to give your character more of a struggle in trying to learn whatever she's trying to learn (since I didn't catch that), and make her try harder and harder to learn it. Don't just skip to 20 minutes later. But Chapter 2 didn't match with Chapter 1 at all in my opinion. Give some more information in Chapter 1 about her living with foster parents, etc. Plus, you need to tell more of what your character is thinking and feeling. In almost every paragraph there is someone talking and only a small amount of details. Hope I helped, and good luck.